/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>6894343
Not sure if you were going for this expression but I leaned into that eyeshape. Best advise I can give right now for you is try not to make sketchy lines(unless it's a deliberate aesthetic choice, this sometimes works for hair but not for things like shoulders), draw slow and try to make deliberate strokes, it's also fine to have blurry values but you need more confident hard shapes to make it more readable. For the nose I also would recommend using values to imply the shape instead of lines, similar to the shading under the eye. Goodluck