/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2509011
Aight I did a 10 min over paint.

My thoughts:

Design:
It looks sorta like a cow skull or definitely some type of herbivore other than the bottom jaw and teeth. The jaw is too thin and the teeth dont have form or exhibit function. The front and back of the skull are impossibly small and again dont match the bottom. Horns are also made from a different material than the rest of the skeleton so it shouldn't look like it is the same. Look at real animals and think why they have that form.

Fundamentals:
The shadow shapes need to be stronger and more consistent and the whole thing other than the eye and background lack a range of values. I think if you draw out the shadow shapes and figure out where you darkest values are and fill them in first will help strengthen t he drawing. It will also give it some hard edges and clear separation. It wont help it look photo real, but it will help it read better and look more solid.

That is all i could think of and if you dont agree just ignore me. I dont paint yet and have no exp in it.