/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2973709
There are many issues in even such a small piece. If I could give generic advice first: read Perspective Made Easy. These are very beginner mistakes you can easily train out of your system and never make again in just a few days

Specifically though? Biggest flaw is that there are multiple eye levels. Your drawing is in 2 point, and in 2 point there is only one horizon line, and in 2 point the horizon line is also the eye level. Take a look at my red & blue lines. The Vanishing point for the bar counter is in red. And where that VP is, there is the horizon line. The horizon line is also the eye level, so anything ABOVE the horizon line is something we're looking UP at. The cabinet in the background I lined in blue, because even though, based off the counter top we should be looking UP at it, it looks like we're really looking down on it, because its vanishing points converge at a point above the horizon line of the counter.

I mean that's one flaw. A major flaw. But as you can see by the line on the bottom of the counter there's really no consistency here at all. Things are roughly trying to go to a vanishing point but nothing really does. Needs more draftsmanship.

If you want to improve it, set the eye level, pick 2 VPs, make everything go to them consistently (the counter, cabinet, chairs, and walls should all share the same VP), use straight lines, and take your time.