/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

No clue about expressions. Whenever I deviate from "indifferent" it looks like shit

>>4285713
Very good, but you don't seem to give much thought to value ranges. The cape is a dark fabric, the value range should be extremely low and defined mostly with shadows. The way you rendered it is more akin to brushed metal.

>>4282138
I like how you didn't over exaggerate the butt.
She looks vulnerable and cute.

>>4283637
The soul is there, but you should've spent a little more time figuring things out with thumbnails in the early stages.
The pose could've been pushed more and many tangents could've been avoided. Posting red in a bit