/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

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>>7105517
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Don't know if you're the same anon, but your gestures aren't that bad. I would work on simplifying the shapes and accentuating one or two "ideas" of the figure.

Think about what you're trying to tell or jot down with the gesture you're drawing. Sometimes, it's as simple as "I like the hips, I'll focus on them" or "she's reading a book, I'll accentuate her character". For the latter, is she nerdy? Is she bored? Is she super into the book? Is she just posing the book, looking like a pinup?

All these questions will naturally guide you to the right gesture. And all gesture is, is an idea. You're essentially getting down something quick to build on later on.

Sorry for the long post, hope it helps. Feel free to ask if you have more questions.