/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2155990
bbc chan I think you should work on your males.
The anatomy for the body is usually very impressive and I can tell you're skilled.

I see handsome dudes in porn/art and I try to study what makes them handsome. A lot of your guy's faces are kinda...
well, they end up looking like a weird cross between a slutty girl, a black dude, and an unfortunate SE asian.

From what I have learned studying various artists works (I'm mainly talking animu here) The face is very simple and mostly angular. A pointed thin nose and the lips, while drawn very simply, usually are drawn with a straight line under the mouth.
I think adding the top lip usually ends in the male looking more feminine if you're already giving him an angular face.


I also see box/rectangle type faces with shorter noses (but not wide) usually drawn with muscles. I pretty much see these types as handsome japanese dudes. This isn't a typical animated style but a lot of this type of handsome in the art community.

What I see in your art is not a good use of angular male faces. Black dudes have rounder facial features and that's fine for them I guess, but if you add rounded features to any other dude. You gotta make him stocky or work on more angular composition, or else he ends up looking like a Malaysian whore.