/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2065114
doesn't matter if they're too long really (they're on the longer side but i still think within the range of standard deviation) as long as they look "right" you kno what i'm mean? you'll get it over time with experience, how to exaggerate an have it still feel "natural". her left legs an her hips are a lil bit outta perspective from each other, to the point where it looks like her left leg (our right) looks like it's connectin a bit too low. the redline shows where her thigh bone should be for how her hip is positioned while the blue line shows where her thigh bone currently appears to be for me, i hope it helps (sorry if it doesn't (also where is her other fooot sammy needs both feets ;-;))

>>2065047
the only thing i'd personally suggest learnin an takin to heart from loomis is his use of boxes for perspective an shiz, other wise i'd whole wholeheartedly suggest vilppu over him, an personal study of live models/yourself/photos if that's absolutely all you can get. when i first started out drawin an couldn't figure out a pose (which was most of the time) i'd run to the bathroom an stand in front of the mirror an make the pose an then study all the contours an muscles an an how they overlapped themselves an bones an joints an all that, an then i'd run back to my room an draw, which forced me to come up with "shortcuts" where i'd deconstruct the body in my head so that i could more easily reproduce it from memory instead of bein stuck directly copyin. for example, if you can only get a photo for ref, study it intently for a period, then try drawin it without lookin at it an remember the parts that you get to where your mind is jus like "fuck i have no idea how this is supposed to look" an then when you're done, compare it to the photo an figure out those parts you blanked on. lather rinse an repeat. now this isn't supposed to replace regular studies where you can keep lookin at your ref/model/whatever, but a study tool to help you draw from your imagination