/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2551662
I shall rescue this thread.

That looks pretty shallow and weird bondagefairy, I reccomendhotkinkyjo, there's some videos where they have the butt held open by a clamp and you can see all the way down, as well as the normal gaping and fisting ones.

Nice figures susi but they're pretty chunky, and something about the proportions makes it hard to tell if they're midgets or chunky adults or weirdly proportioned kids. If they're girls around puberty age like the sterotypical ballerina then they should be quite elongated. When girls hit puberty they go like legs first and become gangly, and then fill out later.

Sasori the owl head looks too far back to be connected to the neck and torso at all. Shoulders should be either side of the head, and try think about placement of a human chin, how there's that kind of overhang and it juts out ahead of the neck, not directly above it.

Jeremias the shaded in heads feel even flatter, try think about how hair is layered. So there'd be a darker tone in patches at the bottom layer closest to the skull, then mostly mid tones over this, and then a few lighter tones on the crest/edges of the form, and then a few highlights to look good. Pic kind of related but with hair oiled up like this it becomes more like modelling out clay; planes towards the light being lit, planes away being dark, then smoother and sharper transitions, etc.