/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4374947
I'll try this out someday. Hopefully it'll turn out like the powerpuff girls and panty&stocking.

>>4374985
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>>4377000
Nice colors! I think whatever it is that inspires you, it's surely some good stuff. I get the Flip Flappers vibe from those colors.

Not a redline or anything, but just some suggestions: I think in terms of lines, there should be some hierarchy between line weights. There are many different ways to go about it. Pic related: I used the good old thick lines for silhouette and large shapes, with gentler lines within those areas. The lines may grow thicker at areas of occlusion where two forms meet. The trickiest lines though, are those that you don't draw, but imply where it begins and where it ends.

I think your colors are on track; I did a color thumb just to see how it could turn out.

>>4375066
P-please aim higher. I never finish art books, but I'm going back to Loomis and Draw-a-Box so I can recommend them. James Gurney's Light and Color is a must-read. More importantly, still-life and live drawing will teach you the most... I haven't done them in ages hence the stagnation.

>>4375137
Just wanna say you're one of the reason I still post.

>>4375978
It's some common 'pencil' brush that you can find anywhere. For rendering it's literally the basic round brush.

>>4378285
It's NSFW and not very good for you.

>>4377326
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>>4378924
Gneiss, these rock.