/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2460949
There's something horrible going on with the proportions of her body.
For starters, the head it's too big even for a kid, that right arm is completely disfigured and it looks like she just lacks an upper arm entirely.
The torso is too thick, shapeless and long for her tiny skinny short legs, even if the robe is supposed to be "loose" around her, it look like a sheet enveloping a tree trunk. Since there are so many variations of kimonos and robes out there, I'll not get too into the design, but the obi, on women robes, is always ubicated higher on the waist just under the bust so give some shape to the body.
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And the more I stare at it, the more it makes me remember this other image I saw some time ago but I can't remember the series so I'll stop now...