/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>5067024
Okay so first I wish I were better so that I can help more with a redraw but I’m obviously beg too. Anyway my thoughts is that a lot of the drawing is broken due to misunderstanding. So what’s giving off the very uncanny head is cus you basically didn’t apply any perspective to the face you drew and just drew it how you see it in a a reference I think. You really should look into proportions of heads fo shoulders and how clavicles are positioned, I don’t think they would ever be angled down like that especially with that posture

TLDR of that is the head and body basically don’t match at all and the body is far too long mostly thanks for the legs. Drawing things like toes is very not important until you fully figure out constructing the rest of the body cus it’s a waste of time decorating something potentially bad. I think you’re on the right track for actually drawing and you should either try redrawing a lot of that maybe with this edit in mind or just start something new and keep perspective in mind while using ref

If anyone thinks my advice is bad on this, I’d be happy to see how you’d improve on the drawing