/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>5215983
Break it down into blocks then refine them. This video might help you understand what I mean
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iuVGowpA_vs
For the "direction" of the hair, it always flows from a line or a dot that you place somewhere on the top of the head. pic related

>>3950134
Neck to head connection is janky, it's weird that it's shaped like a V with the upper part being bigger than the base.
Her left tit shouldn't be facing that way, it should be looking at us. Learn how tits works.
Hair is very messy and there are 2 straight lines in there that look bad, starting right from behind her ear. Draw a point or a line in perspective and let it flow from there in "bands", pic related.
Clean up the folds of the skirt, they're really random.
Perspective on her left leg is weird, we should be seeing less pantsu.

We can't see the rest of your work so judging your progress is impossible anon. However, that's starting not to look like the stuff I see in /beg/. Nice hands, nice curves here and there. Keep it up bro.

>>3893064
Big shapes, big shapes are important not the tiny details

>>3869047
Simplify it in simpler shapes, make it flow from a defined point or line.