/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4322438
I'm busy so only did the first three.
Have some amateur feedback and subjective opinions, take what makes sense to you and disregard everything else.

>Nessie
Strengths: Your colours are pleasingly harmonious, and your style has strong appeal.
Areas of improvement: Clothing creases and anatomy feel 'winged'. Pick up refs, actually look at how creases work, where bony landmarks are and muscles show. Do studies that exaggerate them, even. Apply or combine that to your imagination and personal work. Having that understanding will show and make your characters that much more convincing.
Also see feedback for mysticlog.

>mysticlog
Strengths: You have a cute style developing, especially some of the expressions and proportions.
Areas of improvement: (Nessie also read this) your style could feel more 'designed'. Check out Disney and Yoshinari - animators in general, the efficiency in their shapes and detail, big-med-small shapes and spacing, pay attention to your silhouettes, can you make them clearer?
Also learn to mannequinize or break a figure into simple 3d shapes.

>echo
Strengths: A good eye for proportions and angles.
A little flat and undefined, would be good to see more defined planes or grouped values. Try painting features not through lines/brush strokes, but as shapes. There's a softness that seems like you're afraid to go hard on shadow shapes or to define facial features. Would like to see you tackle something with harsher lighting.
Note: Forgive me, I rarely paint.

Finally, please keep at it daddies, you're doing good.