/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Ok, don't chew me out please, not the first time I try this one, lots of legitimate mistakes but others were caused by me using a phone and zooming in the image i.e always at the start on the head, and that ruins the scale of things, after I noticed that I didn't have enough space I started doing it faster.
Now, this should be half valid, I'll print the original and do it correctly tomorrow or during the weekend.

>what do you get about my beg level from this uncomplete exercise?