/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Great to see a pixel art thread on /ic/ filled with oc and not the same old pieces made by Helm/Junkboy/Elk/etc.

>>1729795
The anti-aliased background is contrasting too much with the non anti-aliased robot. Don't just scale down a pre-existing image without trying to clean it up. My attempt is pretty sloppy, but you get the idea.

Changed the shadows of the ROBOT letters. I also changed the position of the R and the second O, but all of those letters could definitely be tweaked.

The thickness of the light red outline wasn't consitent.

Added more pronounced shadows on the robot. Originally it was kind of flat. I'm not good at adding shadows, but you get the idea.

Gave the other letters harder edges. Tweaked the stars.