/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2841808
The cranium is bigger than it should be, or at least her hair implies that. lt makes the rest of the face look too small in comparison. Stop doing that "eyes and eyebrows on top of the hair" shit because it looks dumb and doesn't make sense. The side of the face is too angular, so l changed the shape of the face to make it into a less extreme angle. The ear is too small and too pointy. l tried to add more value to the hair because it was looking pretty flat, but l can't tell where the light source is supposed to be. The values you use for shadows are so close to the midtone you might as well just make everything flat colors. The neck looks like its just a cylinder, as well, so l tried to fix that. The flow of the ponytail felt unnaturally straight so l changed the flow. l also connected the lines of the mouth and made the visible eye wider, but maybe thats more a matter of personal taste. Her glasses look like they're falling off her face, but l wasn't too sure how to fix that. As for her body, her shoulders seem too small in comparison to her torso, and the right breast is smaller than the left one.
l'm not too good at explaining myself verbally because l'm a filthy esl, so hopefully pic related illustrates what l mean well enough.