/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

If you are a /beg/inner or /int/ermediate in art, please use this thread to post pieces for critique or ask for advice.
Use this thread instead of making new threads or post in the drawthread with fundamental exercises.

RESIZE YOUR IMAGES TO ~1000 PIXELS wide using one of the following methods:
1. screenshot the image and post that instead
2. change camera capture settings to something smaller
3. send to computer and resize in MSPaint

READ THE STICKY:
Completed: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1uwaXKU7ev6Tw_or__o8ARpUb6r2rCZYJGqwSFV9AD98/edit
New collaborative sticky (anyone can edit): https://hackmd.io/UMnZVhNITW-T2wZpHw6d0Q
Old: http://www.squidoo.com/how-to-draw-learn

RECOMMENDED BOOKS FOR BEGINNERS:
Read the sticky

TRY TO BE ACTIVE AND GIVE PEOPLE SOME FEEDBACK.
When giving feedback, avoid vague "advice" - point what's wrong and try to give the anon you're quoting a clear direction to improve their art (study heads < watch THIS VIDEO about head structure, read THIS SECTION of THIS ARTIST'S BOOK, etc).
You, feedback seeking anon, should also try to be clear and concise when asking for critique/help. When posting your artwork, say what you want help with, and what's your goal with the study/artwork.

Previous Thread: >>6361801

Hello beg, today i skipped the schedule focusing on mostly heads and instead i made this meme.

>>6362212
they look great to me but the only thing i saw about curing "stiff" drawings are gesture exercises so maybe look into that
>>6362131
coom
>>6362126
i like it, it shows promise of soul
>>6362065
she looks like she fucks teenager boys
>>6362048
if you struggle to draw 1:1 copy from reference then you need Keys to Drawing which are all about that observation + more
>>6361995
legs are TOO LONG but who knows maybe you wanted to make alien
>>6361991
https://www.ctrlpaint.com
>>6361822
i kneel
>>6361811
to become full fledged BEG is to master drawing from observation and there is this book i shill a lot: keys to drawing. It has theory, practical tips and exercises for prebegs so at the end of the book they ascend into beg if not higher. If you want to be hardcore copy also every single drawing in the book, not just the exercises as you read it
>>6362215
Start with not hiding hands and legs. You could also be way more bold with shadows or add texture
>>6362253
Have you considered adding "canvas" texture after you are done? Many people work like that. The first draw using the hard round brush meme and at the end they make new layer under or over and pick texture or fancy brush and with few strokes slap texture to it