/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4959784
Your line quality is actually clean in terms of literal cleanliness. However, your perspective/form seems wonky. Those hands are at quite weird angles compared to the dick. Look up references of blowjobs/'hand grabbing pole' and you'll kind see it. I can tell you're actually going for the "dick too big for hands" thing, but the actual angles of the fingers with relation to the hands/arms are quite off.
The pose was an interesting idea, but you were probably better off choosing between sitting down, or bending right over the cock.
Final note, the hair over the shoulder looks awkward.I realize that this is sort of how the hair looks in the cartoon, but there were definitely better options with regard to placement. Think about the silhouette of 1)Your entire drawing and 2)different 'sections' of it. The head/hair section would have quite a weird silhouette.
Anyways, I'm not sure... but this drawing might not be allowed here, kek.