/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4853929
I get what you're saying and agree completely. When I say I've "drawn a bit from highschool but never seriously" I was pretty much meant I was occasionally doing doodles. It's why I dont really count it in my mind.

>>4853930
People always say it looks like I dont studies fundies. But I've been studying them for over a year. Clearly I'm doing something wrong in my application. I get my stuff isn't good but people keep telling me it looks like I haven't studied at all. Here's a more recent example with my drawing of The World. I tried to apply some shading, I used a lot of construction to make this and tried to forshorten. I tried to make it also not a direct copy. Even that CSM drawing I tried to apply what I've learned. I get the faults on my end, but I'm trying to apply the stuff I learn to my drawings but I get the response (looks like you haven't studied). Am I that much of a retard?

So I posted this before, but I was hoping this time around I could get some criticism. Specifically on "The World" and Ruby there on the bottom. I have so much trouble on mapping the eyes still. But I also want some criticism in general. I want some breakdowns on what I'm doing wrong.

Also I think there is this autistic dude that has a hate boner for me whenever I post.

Everyone post your current sketchbook page you filled out

As you can see I'm inconsistent as fuck and cannot fucking draw women at all, especially anime girls.