/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>6686385
good job for not letting my unhinged rant throw you off. your hair shading is pretty good, and the head is good in general, lineart and coloring wise

but the torso needs work, I think you practiced heads a lot but are just getting into torsos and below, that's what it seems like. maybe for next drawing try to exaggerate the curves a bit more

I'd still remove the weird bra that's under the bra, and also I wouldn't shade the mouth on the lip itself but just a little dash underneath it (or not at all)

the hand you revealed will look good if you make the fingers just hang loose like in this pic I attached

>>6686346
you're welcome. don't be too self critical, as long as you're drawing and doing stuff you're good, there's no endgame in art