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Bro, study your fundamentals, and form etc.
It looks to me like you are just randomly adding cel shading etc,
and you aren't really thinking about shadows as a tool to define the form.
To me, idk if it's only me, or if I am autistic, but the shading of the legs suggests that it is going inward, and
then the feet are broken, like nothing looks connected. It doesn't look like she is a solid object in space.
Like, study your fundamentals. You have no knowledge of perspective/you aren't thinking about perspective.
The hair looks really cool, the folds and the attention to detail is nice. Overall, it looks very polished, which is nice.
But the fundamental drawing is flawed, and nothing, NOTHING you do will make this look good. No matter
how much you polish it etc etc, you have to study your fundies. GO BACK TO THE FUNDIES.

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