/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3887726
Hey, it's me again with more spoonfeeding for big baby anon. Your line confidence is very bad, it's atrocious. Terrible. Have any experience with traditional drawing? Discern whether or not your problem is in not being able to place the lines you want because of >digital or because your brain just doesn't know what kind of line to place so your hand just randomly pull lines while feverishly tapping CTRL+Z while hoping that the line you place somewhat looks right. For the former, use a stabilizer, it's a nice crutch for /begs/. For the latter, train your mind's eye by being more analytical about things. Nail it down to your head how shapes look, and how do you want to convey them before actually placing a line on your canvas.

Going by the underlayer red sketch, proportion is beyond stupid and disappointing. I expected better of your measurement autism. Stand upright and loosen your arm, then look at me in the eye and tell me the human arm ends above the hipline. Pose is also bad, stop hiding hand just because you can't draw them. No one lies down on their tummy with their hands underneath. Head placement is awkward because you probably can't properly understand the various angles of a form. Start getting into 3/4 views. There isn't much more to say when the drawing isn't even 20% finished.