/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2990182
Woo, it looks like you're studying construction! Good for you. Your faces are already having more symmetry and alignment to them than before. You're showing the planes of the head now which is good.

One thing I'd like to point out is that your noses look a bit long. A good rule of thumb is to keep the base of the nose halfway between browline and chin. Learn the basic division of proportions. You can just learn the front view and it will translate directly to all other views. Loomis or Hampton, either one. In terms of foreshortening, the gaps between features shrinks as they move further from view.

Next is that you're face is slanted, the chin is far in front of the forehead on most. Compare it to the bald head which has a better angle. Study the head in profile to see just how the plane of the face curves. I think the main problem though is that you're forgetting to move the jaw/earline along with the head. So when your face tilts up, the jaw stretches out rather than also tilting.

>>2970124
>>2975462
Not that anon but you should study realistic facial proportions first and stylize to your liking later.