/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>1907725
Too much grey in the shadows. You need to introduce some warmer tones in there. The shadows go waaaay too deep in the face and don't follow the planes too well.

You've over emphasized the forehead's wrinkles, making her look old and the forehead bulbous. The dip under the nose should start from the middle of the nose and get wider and rounder as it heads down, as opposed to two lines of snot from the nostrils. You've over emphasized the neck muscles, especially for such a relaxed pose.

Try not to draw the hair as one slightly textured blob on the head. Identify the flow and the general chunks/shapes in the hair and draw those, remembering that the surface is made of strands, not velvet.

I hate the Brush pattern you used for the fur. You're better off just drawing it yourself.