/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4795871
You have... a lot of issues in this piece, the biggest being the fact that it is literally only made of symbols. I cleaned up and adjusted the face a bit, but your biggest issue is you seem to be drawing what you *think* goes in a certain place, and doing it wrong.

The eye is an orb- it should be shaded around the edges. I'm not sure where your light-source is, but given the large amount of highlight on her hair, i assumed some kind of top-down lighting.

The eyes shouldn't be as white as the teeth if they're behind sunglasses. The glasses also shouldn't be highlighted like that unless there is also a light-source in front of her, which would eliminate a lot of the shadows.

The hands are beyond repair- please do some life drawings of them, even from reference.

All in all this could be a good piece- I like the colors you picked out, though I'd reduce the saturation on the turtleneck.


You have potential. Do some form studies and some studies from reference.