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>>3657350
Thanks a lot for your kind words! I'm lazy ass >>3656528 lol.
I wanted to also give leave you a tiny comment on your picture, I really like the helmet you have going on there, it's really simple at the moment but I like the shape. The rest is just the eyes on 2 sections that were bothering me and maybe the bottom right one because it's a picture it has some perspective distortion due to how you took it? I tried to fix it a bit with liquify on PS and painted over the eyes for focusing the stare convergence forward.

>>3657278 I think you sketch looks cooler because of all the dynamism you had with your lines, even on the background is adding to the motion towards the character path trail. But then on the linework you lost it, became static, no more explosions or overlapping buildings crumbling near the arm or the background shapes following the walking path.

>>3657452
I don't mind the desaturated colors or face as much as the hand, it looks tiny, at least from index to small fingers and maybe the heel side of the palm too (small finger side).

>>3657472 I love that reaction image, ha ha.
>>3657497 Going too soft now, with it, needs more shadow area shapes to brake it up.

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