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>> No.2099265 [View]
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I need some feedback on this thing's composition. I posted this on the beginner thread and one Anon said the dragon felt way on the foreground therefore the man-thing I drew didn't feel in danger or in aim of fire, and he's probably right. But I still want as many feedback as possible, so please guys give me some external views.

Also, regarding the other thing: how do I fix it, by making the man darker? the beast lighter? the man closer to the center? or to the bottom? or putting some more things in front of the monster's head?

>> No.2098713 [View]
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How's my composition, /ic/? I'd like to know what to change right now since it's in early stages, so tell me what things I should tweak please.

I think the little dude isn't on focus enough, how do I improve that?

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