/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2337181
I'm not familiar with Photoshop since I am poor, it just looks like the quality of your lines are really low. There is a lot of background 'noise' in your lines, you should use layers, making a rough sketch, then another one on top and then a final one where you really put your mind to the shape of the lines.

Pic related is what I do.

Also if you want to avoid thick lines you're kinda steered towards realism, or at least the thin lines give you a lot less room for error, since shit that flies with thick lines might not when they are all thin, it requires you to know the subtle form of muscles in the hips, fingers, shoulders and eyelids and so forth.

If you want to avoid shaky lines, you can try to increase the resolution, go real close and draw the lines, then decrease the resolution, it'll smooth over it a bit.