/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4506084
go easy on me, i was studying martial poses but keep chicken scratching, this was two hours work btw. How many years do i got left to be good?

>>4489835
ok.
>body to elongated but bear in mind i spent a lot of time figuring out the legs and couldnt erase it
>i think im getting good at three dimensions but he still looks quite flat and he has no wait to his punch
>muscles still look tacked and not with his body
>legs too short and uneven
>neck to long

But im quite happy with the kick one above, probably because i didnt have to draw legs this time