/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

i posted in the stylization thread and i need help with this as well, im too comfortable doing giant thick lines and im trying to figure out a way to reduce them since i go way too hard

im slowly figuring it out as i work on the face and hair but some advice or opinions would be nice to speed up my process

what should i do to get rid of these giant fucking black lines? im trying to paint over them and maybe by the end of this drawing i will figure it out but im too fixated on these giant bold black lines from when i used to do cel shade style coloring and now im trying to use more tonality and they stick out like a sore thumb