/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

i think its finally starting to work out
i know the values are still off but im adjusting them as i go
and theres a few mistakes but my answer to that is practice practice
the main thing is that i feel now that the brick wall is crumbling and that my approach is starting to work out. Faragasso clearly stated that he does not approve of using the Reilly method as a roadmap that you fill in with shading. i distanced myself more and more from the roadmap with the previous attempts and with this one its finally bearing fruits.
furthermore im using too much white in this, i will avoid using white next time