/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Anything plain wrong with this? I did the sitting pose first and later tried to awkwardly draw a chair or a couch. Made it even harder for myself deciding to add a cape to her so it's supposed to be squished in there.
And God knows if the angle on the room is right, but I woke up today after dreaming I was reading some very detailed manga chapters and I couldn't believe my brain actually imagined those drawings and paneling, so I should be able to do it while awake.