/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

I asked on the /beg/ thread but no one replied. I'd would like for someone to redline this if possible, and to show how to make the monster's face more like it's actually being pulled by. I can't put it into clearer words, but I hope it's understandable. It's supposed to be a meme drawing, the monster is a ghast from Call of Cthulhu 7th edition.

I'd wish for someone to redline this. Also, any tips or criticisms. It's supposed to be a meme drawing, but it doesn't feel right. Also, if anyone can make the monster's face seem more like it's being actually grabbed on, I can't explain it right but I think you'll understand. The face is inspired from the bald guy from Brazzers, the monster is a ghast from Call of Cthulhu and the overall pose is a picture from my country's president. Any help would be extremely useful to me, thanks <3