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It's a tricky one anon for me I would like to play with the feet a bit more but, I think the issue is with the legs. I had the feeling like he might be falling backwards but it was very subtle, I tried to put myself in that pose and you can hold it but all weight rest in the heels. I tried a bit more putting the weight on one foot instead.
The hands did feel awkward how you have them. Also, well the head you might want it looking down to something but I would tilt it back up a bit again, unless you want some threatening emotion stare from the pose, the maybe just make him look more straight but keep the chin low.

All in all, I feel I can't really give you good advice on this one, except for the hands the rest of issues are really subtle to me. Maybe someone else can spot the issue you are having better, I feel I'm going to miss the mark on this one.

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