/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>6551035
It looks great. The biggest issues holding your drawing back are the hair not conforming to the skull, the titties flattening due to nipple placement, and calf is too small for the thigh.

If you just fixed the hair so that it fit her head, it immediately looks much better. Right now you are giving her blow-dry 80s hair. I tend to have this problem myself sometimes and have to correct myself. Remember to fit the hair to the skull, it doesn’t float way up over. Now I know you want long ass subway titties but we still need to make sure they have that meaty volume, so remember to place nipples accordingly. Utilize cross-contour lines to get a feel for the tit-form if you must but do them justice! Lastly, minor gripes over the calves not being large enough for the thighs and the hips not being wide enough for thighs either, so keep your eye on the proportions - make things fit proportionally.