/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>5207913
values need work and you don't have a proper understanding of where your lightsource is coming from, for instance, you shaded both tits in the same exact way when, assuming light is coming from somewhere in the front right, the part i circled should be lighter, i would also throw in a few highlights around her stomach aswell.
the black lineart makes it look like cheap and inorganic especially around places like the collarbone and armpits, use darker values instead of lines when painting
that's not how the torso and hips connect, it look disfigured.

also even though only half of it is there i find the neck and headshape unappealing