/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

random doodle

>>2557757
thx m8
with your fix it contrast a lot, mine went too rigid at the end, the blue clothing placement neither helps to read the silouette so it reads even more stiff :/

>>2557793
draw the right arm with foreshortening, the robes doing a spiral around it, just don't hide that hand
values are great, she's cute, just do anything else with the right arm