/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Switching to black/white for your viewing pleasure

>>5221566
Absolutely great stuff man. My only complaint is that both barrels are smoking and there's only one bullet in the previous panel. I'd love to see one through the head, one through the vinyl.

>>5221588
hell yeah the legend continues.

I think you could maybe use some more action/motion lines like you're using them to convey motion in the Absolute Power Move 4th panel. I think showing some motion for other movements would help make this feel a bit more dynamic, as well as exploring other camera angles. Each of the first three panels are very similar, showing different angles will help the reader get a better idea of the action taking place as well as keep them visually stimulated. This is good stuff, keep it up.