/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

I did shade again the clothing, this time without having look at the original while paining or any of the previous copies for 2weeks
1. the shading of the boobs is "acceptable", but the angle of shadows the original has gives the boobs a way better rounder and not too sagging appearance
2. I totally ignored the armpit part
3. for some reason I ignored the shape of her body, instead of taking into consideration her belly, I shaded that area as if it was hollow
4. didnt gave shade to the space between the boobs
5. I messed up the tension folds in the clothes