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>>2461166
Oh, I definitely agree. Construction should come first. His entire sketch seems to be playing it safe, and shows a lack of confidence.

I would recommend he do lots of figure drawing, and really polish those sketches giving them weighted lines and such. However, he should figure draw either in traditional, or on a single layer, and aim to produce clean drawings from those. I think that will teach him a lot.

15 mins per pose, 3 hours a day, 2 days a week for... a good 4 months will do him wonders.

Even better if he can do live models, but if not, photos are the next best thing.

Pic related is what he should aim for.

If he can set himself a goal of reaching this level of drawing in figure sketches in 3ish months, the rest of his work will benefit greatly from it.