/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>6287295
You had made noticeable improvements to the posture in your left version; the one on the right, frankly, seems quite lacking in comparison (except the face, which looks nice).

Therefore, I suggest that you continue tweaking the drawing on the left, but that you take some rest beforehand, in order to gather enough energy and motivation.

My advice is that you try to sketch the outline of the costal margin of her ribcage, the one that forms a sort of W over the abdomen (pic related). To simplify, try to think of the shape of the ribcage as a sort of boiled egg, with a somewhat triangular slice taken off the bottom. If you sketch the costal margin, that will help you get a better grasp of the shape and volume of the ribcage, which in turn will allow you to position the breasts and abdomen in a more accurate way.

Lastly, you should lower her right breast, since, even when taking perspective into account, it seems to be placed at a higher position on her torso than her left one.