/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>5165343
I understand you tried to add dynamism but just moving the head won't cut it. There's no contraposto (look at classical greek sculptures to see what I mean) and everything is rigid and stiff.

The way you made her arm move in the back is very jarring, not only because the hand on her hip is very broken, but also because her two elbows are aligned horizontally when they shouldn't be; Since she is moving her arms in the back and upwards, the elbow should follow suite - and be place higher.

The head is misconstructed too. It's not aligned with the cranium's shape, and imo, it would look better if the mouth was more centered and smaller - the way you placed it, it makes her look like she's missing a chin.

I tried redrawing it, I hope it follows the idea you had originally. I think you should absolutely work on your construction and gestures, you're biting more than you can chew at your current level.