/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4676239
I'll preface by saying I am by no means an expert, but a few things stood out to me. First being that her body is all twisted up. Her face points right, her torso to the left, then her legs back to the right. After flipping the pieces around I noticed her legs are also out of perspective with the rest. Her legs look like we're looking dead on at them whereas everything else is turned. There's multiple ways to fix all of this, either do what I edited it into which is having everything facing the same way, or alternatively you can have legs + torso facing one way and the head to the other. Or if you were going more for the body being straight on and the head being turned you could do that, but that would require you to redraw everything since her torso is turned.