/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

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>>1544504
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Not that other anon, but basically I think the problem is largely that the lower lid droops so low. Typically the bottom edge of the iris is flush with the bottom eyelid. I don't do stylized stuff personally, so may be a bit off, but this is my take on it (plus a bit of other overpainting on the image...hope you don't mind!).