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>>3657497
Hi, the guy who painted over your drawing here.
Seem like you still having trouble so i made a simple tut on how i usually do hairs.
The idea is build a base first -> add tone and gradient using underpaint brush -> Add shadow with watercolor -> Clean edges and everything with Brush. I sometime use hard eraser to do the outer edge but most of the time i just use hard brush with bg color to do it.
You can switch between watercolor and brush depend on how blurry or hard you want the part look.
You seem to have a hard time differentiate shadow and light, just use refs to help you and over time you can do it without refs.
And also don't mind the shitty wip below.