/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>1816763
not bad, reminds me of Falcoon. i was a big fan when i started drawing.
just a few nitpicks: the legs are almost as big as the head; some folds don't make sense; make her look at the pumped fist, just so it serves a purpose and doesn't just float there; i moved the hand in pocket because frontal pocket is in front of the midline of the pants; i don't know that kind of shoes, but generally they have heels.
take it as you will, i'm still learning myself.