/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>1523917
Thanks for the detailed feedback man! First thing is to finish up that new colour comp (I'm honoured that it reminds you of Ruanjia!).

The jaguar guy I am pretty happy with, I just never bothered updating my website haha! I guess he deserves to be in my portfolio though. As for the size of the jaguar, looking again it might be a bit small yeah. According to wikipedia they only get like 2.5 feet tall though. But I don't think he is that big in the painting.

I'm not too sure what it is that makes Broadsword and Beast and the dragon thingy appear unfinished...I tried to leave them a bit painterly. I dunno, I guess it's a fine line between painterly and sketchy.

Interesting too that you think the collab is so weak technically, because the girl I painted it with I think is a better artist than me haha! Attached is another one we were working on a while ago but got abandoned due to personal issues that arose between us...it's not done obviously, but I still kinda like it. This one was mostly her work though, I think I just fixed her values a lot, did most of the colour work, and then fixed a lot of small shapes in the painting (some of the trees, the cast shadows etc). Composition and design and stuff are all her.