/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>6678789
bottom half is good, but top half is fucked. shoulders are WAY too broad, shoulders are generally thinner than the ass, not wider. head is all wrong, make it be lower and fix the face, there's too many problems. the eyes are too large but I'd increase the size of the jaw and head around them instead, cuz it's too small. keep working anon don't get discouraged, sorry it's so critical but I'm trying to help. bottom half really is well done
>>6678794
this is pretty cute, I like her expression, but the eyes gotta be rotated a bit better, something is off about the face direction cuz one eye is shifted one way, the other eye goes the other way. draw a vertical line for the face and align the features

the boobs would not be perfect circles in this pose, even tho the arms arent squashing them, the clothes would, so I'd flatten out the sides a bit and add a few clothing wrinkles

you draw hair pretty well

>>6678797
hair once again is good, props if you drew it and not traced it
face once again is fucked, the chin point should be shifted left a bit. i see you dont draw noses, is this a style choice or do you not know where they should be? a nose would help you align the other features, even if you erase it later

perspective is very bold, I like that you're trying it, it's good training. ass and shoulders are good, hands obviously are too small and simple, shoes need work but they're the hardest part due to perspective

good luck anon hope it helps don't give up or I will FUCK you up
>>6678799
not anime proportions. the legs need to be way longer, like 1 thigh length longer. shoulders again way too broad. head too small unless you're drawing just a regular human Bean. knife hand is too large and the elbow is too long. feet should be larger, especially back foot.

it's good you are practicing, keep at it

watch this:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YLwSJYZeYOI

look at the pic I attached, use this to map body proportions and limb length. it's from the vid