/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3849177
Right off the bat, keep it consistent. The coloring isn't that good but it's still appealing as a cartoon except for the hair. You used only 2 colors on the rest of the body but you tried to do realistic hair, ditch that in the meantime.
About the rest of it, of course you need anatomy but my tip is to learn to chain forms. Instead of treating the torso as one big cylinder, see how it's actually 3 sections and how they connect at the belly part. Also our forearms are skinnier near the hand and they gradually get bigger as you go away, kinda like this it's hard on the cell phone but you get the idea, our forearms aren't ovals. The face is another can of worms but it works enough.