/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>6361996
solid shapes/porportions, theres not much to critique without just saying develop your style further
i just pushed the pose a bit more, you could probably do it even further
her right titty would be stretched up the left one would be sagging pretty low but depending on her clothing it wouldnt rlly matter much
id also lengthen the forearm little up so she grabs the pole at the palm and not the knuckle area but im too lazy to fix that now
i personally prefer the head a bit smaller but i kept it cause thats subjective to your style